Revisions to Problem Statement
Compared with draft submitted by Tri-State Transportation Campaign, WREPT, STOP, Stony Brook-Millstone Watershed Association and Sierra Club, June 27, 2001
Paragraph 1: expanded sentence
Paragraph 2 (moved from top of page 2; clarify specific EA)
Paragraph 3: Moved from paragraph 3 on page 2
Numbered list:
Prefatory sentence: change "unacceptable" to "high level"
#1: change a few words for clarity, define grades of flow (A through F) more accurately
#3: change "Berrien City" to "Princeton Junction" to make the statement more inclusive of the impact
change "sewers" to "conduits"
delete "devaluing neighborhoods…"
added numbers 10 and 11
Paragraph beginning "Any solution(s)…" modified with grammar and word changes to make it clearer. Moved to before list of resources
List of resources:
rearranged some of the order of list
Added and modified descriptions of D&R Canal and the D&R Canal State Park
Added Lake Carnegie, cemeteries, Red Lion Inn, archaeological sites, Aqueduct Mills, Princeton Operating Station
"In order to inform this process…":
replaced "connected and similar" with "redundant"
consolidated, rearranged and added to list of bulleted items from draft document
Concluding paragraph: minor revisions, with addition of concluding sentence.